Love’s Musings

Traffic jam on a busy lane.
Like a clot in a deep blue vein.
A thousand powers conspire
against the forces of desire.
Battles once won are lost.
My heart’s missing, forever gone.
The noise, the lights and the smoke
can’t stop these thoughts of love.
The distance closes behind me like
dawn breaking through the night.
Every turn of the wheels
takes me closer to a love that’s real
I get that feeling – a kind of rush
I’m coming home to you – to us.

6 thoughts on “Love’s Musings

  1. Sanjay June 7, 2015 / 1:21 pm

    Awesome Rupali

    • rupali66 June 7, 2015 / 3:25 pm

      Thanks Sanjay! Your encouragement helps a lot!

  2. rohini99 July 11, 2015 / 2:26 pm

    Here after a long time Rupali! So happy to see that you’re still writing and exploring where your verse takes you!

    • rupali66 July 12, 2015 / 12:52 pm

      Thank you aunty. Yes, I am still writing and loving every minute of it.

  3. rohini99 July 12, 2015 / 6:22 pm

    Super! That’s how it should be dear. I feel your metaphor and rhythm have matured. What do you think?

    • rupali66 July 13, 2015 / 2:06 am

      Thank you for your comments. I feel that will increase with each piece of poetry.

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